W.A.L.T. write about our holiday recount.
This week our teacher wanted us to write about something we did in the holidays and mine is about getting towed on a boogie board.
I found it hard to write the recount.
Next time I will add more detail.
W.A.L.T. write about our holiday recount.
This week our teacher wanted us to write about something we did in the holidays and mine is about getting towed on a boogie board.
I found it hard to write the recount.
Next time I will add more detail.
Kia ora Bryson,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your holiday recount and the way you used the five senses to describe what you did in the holidays. Maybe next time you could check all your punctuation is in the right place and proofread. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.